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  1. I wrote this in a perspective of a girl just to see if I could. I also would like to thank anyone for any feed back on this even if this isnt counted as an entry I would love any and all constructive criticism. Basically she changes through the battles she fights, coming to an ultimate conclusion of what she will need to do. A few things may be confusing and pardon the word count ( If there is a count limit) but again if its to long to be an entry I would just love some feedback! I also skipped the prologue that explains everything, this is supposed to turn into a manga series thats why the chapters are so short, each chapter is like a book in the manga! Hope you all enjoy! The Character in perspectives name is Kyu Sekai! [spoiler] Chapter 1: The First Fight 光がある限り暗いがある I am waiting with anticipation for the list of names to be posted. I scan the room and see a lot of stiff competition, a few even training and showing their skills to everyone else. This morning my dad gave me four daggers they are kind of big though, but lighter than my regular swords which make them easier to use, my father said to me that they are still made out of the same material as my swords so I still can’t use my ability with them- which is alright because I am used to that, and they will still cause a lot of damage. Suddenly the room goes quiet, the list. A short man, with black short hair that’s tussled at the front, and wearing a suit, pins a piece of paper up on the board. The people in the room swarm towards it like moths to a flame. I am the last to see who I will be facing and when I do I shudder. Yosuke Chiyo v. Akatsuki Akeno Katsu Hiro v. Kyuseishu Sekai Kroh Runaha v. Konome Hiro Katsu Hiro, son of the most skillful swordsmen I know. Of all the people here and I had to fight him in my first round. I glance around the room until I find his eyes and he looks at me for a moment, and then turns away, I cannot lose to him. I won’t lose to him. Then I noticed it, the name that everyone seems to be spouting, Kroh Runaha, The Black Haze. They say he has thrown away victory into the top ten numerous times, and they don’t know why. The fights are picked randomly and again my luck must hate me because I fight first. I see Katsu leap from his chair straight into the arena like a soaring bird, I on the other hand equip my belt and sheath my daggers and walk into the arena, he is not even paying attention to me. He is talking with his friends and joking around, for some reason that makes me angry. The match keeper grabs his attention “This fight will last until one of you his unable to fight, or it is obvious who the winner is”, Katsu looks up and smirks at me, and I can feel my face heat up with embarrassment. He probably sees me as a fragile creature, I think. “after this battle you will enter your three man teams and have a three v, three battle also until one team cannot fight. At this time anything is allowed but do not cause a fatal blow! You may begin!” I feel my body tense up at the sound of the word begin. For a second I had not realized that Katsu already lept into action, but I felt his presence behind me, he is fast, I duck, dodging his punch and pivoting my body so my elbow can connect with his jaw he easily dodges it and makes a quick but nimble retreat, he made a mistake showing everyone his ability so soon, he is fast and agile that’s nothing too special, I watch his movements closely hoping to see that flicker before he disappears, and I do. I aim my kick towards the air but come into contact with his rib. I hear him groan and I lean forward to follow up with a punch but I am too late, he’s already behind me with his sword drawn, I grab one of the daggers and unsheathe it and push down on it leaving it to spin in the air along my back as cover, as I unsheathe my second dagger, I turn to catch the one in the air. As I do Katsu makes his move, I am to slow and the tip of his sword is right in front of my eye I can see the sharpness along its edges, I have to use my ability or it’s over, I close my eyes tight and reopen them, at first I am confused as to where I am but I look behind and surely Katsu is standing there with his sword lunging towards where my eye was. I quickly turn and dash at him, I unsheathe one of my last two daggers and place it by his throat. I win. Although our battle was short it caused a lot of stirring in the audience, “Who is that girl?” is the question I hear numerous times as I walk back to my seat. I am stopped by Kroh, “Kyu is it?” he asks, he has dark grey hair with a way lighter grey streak in the middle, a black under armor t-shirt with matching cargo pants, I nod. He tosses a role at me, at first I flinch but I catch it and realize that its twenty-five thousand dollars, I look up at him “That was a great match, keep the money, you deserve it” he says whilst walking away, I blush. I did it I advanced to the next round, Katsu also advances but in a lower grade than I do. I can feel the heat of his stare burning into the side of my head, “Wow that was amazing!” a girl about my height leans over to me she has dark brown hair shaping her face that drapes to her shoulders, she has a grey shirt and a grey skirt – neutral colours – she has what seems to be sandals on but they cover her foot more than a regular sandal. “I am Akatsuki Akeno, but I rather you call me Suki for short” she says, “Hi, I am Kyu –“ “Sekai, I know. I saw your match with that Hiro guy, uhh Katsu, I think his name was, yeah him, I think its amazing that you can teleport, that’s what you did right!” She sounds almost bewildered that I can do that, my father said that its normal so she should not be this shocked, “yeah” I say timidly. The thing is its not that special. I mean sure I can teleport but I never can pinpoint where I will end up. That’s why I try not to use it unless I really need it. “Well, I hope we can be friends” Suki adds, “Me too” I say acknowledging her request. Chapter 2: Friends 光にしがみつく者 I watched Sukis fight and managed to find out her abilty, healing, her left foot tendon was severed and she was able to walk again within a few seconds, I am not sure if she can heal others or not, but that ability can have its advantages. She ultimately lost her battle, because she could not bear the pain any longer. After a few matches go by it has become time to join our three man cells. Since I have won the first match I get to pick one person to be on my team the other will be appointed to me, I have to pick from the losers. “Ms. Sekai, please pick your teammate think of all the fights you saw and pick one of the losers that will best suit what you want your team to do” the announcer explains. I have not thought of what my team will do, at all. I see Sukis eyes glaring at me, almost pleading with me to pick her and I also see Katsu with his face turned away begging me not to pick him. I choose Suki because her healing may come in handy, she trots over to stand beside me . I watch everyone else get picked including Katsu. We find ourselves waiting, “I noticed in your fight how you didn’t teleport with your daggers” Suki inquires, “I cant teleport with them while they are unsheathed, they are made out of Kamigami no Kinzoku, the gods metal, which cannot be broken and are to dense to teleport with, they are heavier than any other sword out there.” I start to explain, “Why can you teleport with it sheathed then?” she utters, “The sheaths are called Kami no Chariotto, The God’s Chariot, it allows the gods metal to be lightened and carried while I teleport, these daggers are called Ten-gun, Heaven’s Soldiers, but my swords that I usually fight with are called Tengoku no Eiyu, Heavens heroes, there are four of them as well, plus my Katana, which is made out of the same material it’s the heaviest and I can summon it whenever I need it, it’s called Tengoku no Getokipa, Heaven’s Gatekeeper, but I cannot use any other sword while I use the Getokipa” at the end of my statement Suki draws her blade “This is the Shioreta Bata, The Wilted Rose, it is called that because it can fall apart creating a new sword, like petals from a rose. It was my mothers, she gave it to me, she –“ Just then the door swung open and a boy stood there. He had tussled hair that look like he purposely wanted to have bed head he wore a grey jacket with grey pants, and boots.I remember his fight, Unmei Shibo he lost his fight quickly without showing his ability, I have no idea what he can do, “Hi..” he said, “Im Unmei Shibo” “I am Kyu Sekai and this is Suki Akino, welcome to the team” I yawned “We should get some sleep there is a big day ahead of us”. Both Unmei and Suki nodded and move towards there cots, I go to mine Suki douses the light and I drift to sleep. I wake to Suki and Onmei talking with each other, “I am 15,” Suki says cheerfully, “ how old are you?” “Only 12” Onmei stutters, I sit up and they both look at me. “Good morning Kyuseishu.” Onmei greets me, “Please don’t call me that” I groan, Kyuseishu is my full name,”just call me Kyu, okay?” he nods and Suki smiles at me “shut up” I kid halfly. The teams are named by their leaders last name, we are Team Sekai. I actually find it perfect, my dad is the judge in these battles, when he hears our team name he will know that I won in the first round. Suki and I get ready in the girls dorms while Onmei went off to the boys dorms. “What happened to your side?!” Suki urged, “While I was training I dropped the sword and cut myself.” I explained, “Did it hurt?” she asks shyly, “Well of course it did!” I respond. I find a body length mirror in the bathroom and peer at myself. My hair is a really light shade of grey, I picked a white cloak, with light grey pants and a darker grey tank top. If my arms are by my side the cloak hide my swords running on my waist and along my back. Yes, I have decided for this battle I will use my swords to prove to my dad that I am not as weak as he thinks. I walk out of the bathroom and see Suki wearing all white, with her hair braided up, “are you ready?” She asks. I nod. We meet Onmei, he looks worried, “Hey! Onmei. Are you okay?” I ask, he looks at me and I can tell he is fighting back tears. “Hey!! Whats wrong?” Suki beamed, “They changed the rules,” he began “they can kill us.” “Who?” I stammered “Anyone who wants to!” he sobbed. I stare at him. Half of me wants to comfort him, but the other wants to slap him. “Get a hold of yourself!” I started “if they can kill us, then we can kill them!” “How they are really strong?” He asks. I jolt for a moment, lost for words. I see his eyes begging me for an answer, I turn to Suki she looks scared too. He is right most of our opponents are really strong. I smile, ”Are you forgetting, I won the first round!, I am pretty strong too, ya know.” I see that he has stopped crying. I smile at him, “Don’t worry, I will protect you.” I say softly reassuring him. Both he and Suki smiles. We enter the arena all teams were in the booth before us; I see that the arena is humongous. I read a sign entering that it could hold up to sixty-four thousand people. Onmei seems bewildered by the size of it, Suki does not even take a second glance at it. We sit together in a row while the battles commence. “The first battle will commence with Team Runaha v. Team Hanamura, last team able or willing to fight wins, after Team Chiyo v. Team Sekai, be ready!” the game master announces. Team Runaha Team Hanamura Kroh Runaha Akifumi Hanamura Aiko Ishida Hibiki Uno Akemi Mita Mei Ozaki Chapter 3: Blood & Bone I cannot believe we are going up against Team Chiyo, their team consists of Katsu and his brother Konome, it must have been luck that put them on one team, both of them are skilled, one with speed the other with brawn, not to mention their leader Yosuke. I sigh, Onmei looks over at me with a worried face, I smile at him, he smiles back. “Team Sekai and Team Chiyo please step towards your gates” I walk up to the gate, Onmei on my right Suki on my left the gates open and I can see Katsu across the arena. “GO!” I hear the announcers voice. “C’mon” Suki yells, just then I could not believe it but Katsu was behind us. Before I could react I felt the flat of his foot along my back launching me forward, pain shoots through my spine, just as I am about to hit the ground water surrounds me and cushions my fall, I catch my bearing and look behind me, Onmei. I smile at him as he ducks dodging Katsus attack, Katsu lands a hit on him and he goes spiraling backwards I try to dash to his aid but suddenly the ground erupts in front of me, I feel rocks hit my face. I flip back and land on my feet and I look up, Konome. “You will be fighting me girl, I want to know why my brother lost to you, I on the other hand will not lose” he boasts. Great, Konome was more of a dual wielding swordsman. Not to mention his amazing strength, he is wearing a grey muscle shirt with baggy pants and sandals. I assume Suki is fighting Yosuke but I am a bit preoccupied to confirm that. I smile “Well hopefully you can entertain me more than Katsu can.” I taunt, it must have angered him because he jolted toward me leaving a crack in the ground as he left it. But he is slow I easily dodge him; with draw my sword and go in for the attack he turns mid air and grabs me “Haha you think you can flank me like that? Guess again, girl.” He says while smashing me into the ground. Pain shoots through my body and ringing through my ears I can hear Onmei calling my name, Suki too. I can’t lose this fight my dad is watching. I close my eyes and re open looking around I immediately know where I am, I look down and there is Konome drawing his sword. I unsheathe mine and push off the air down towards him he spins around noticing me but is too late, I plunge my sword into his shoulder, a gasp of pain escapes his mouth. He stumbles back clutching his shoulder, “Awe don’t tell me this is all the Hiro family heirs have, I mean your father is a legend, but you and Katsu are pathetic.” “Shut up!” he yells while picking up his sword, “I will kill you!” just then he was behind me I was shocked, I thought he had strength not speed. His foot comes down on my shoulder knocking me down to the ground he picks me up and throws me, I try to land but again he is behind me and grabs the back of my head and drives it into the ground, a stinging sensation surges through my face he pulls me out and throws me into the arena wall. I fall to the ground and feel the blood dripping from my mouth and head. How is this possible? He is strong and fast? I don’t have much time before his feet appear under my face. “That’s right, bow to me girl! I am far greater than you!” He tells me. I can’t feel my body, blood surrounds my face and my bones feel broken, I hear Onmei scream, I promised to protect him! I will not lose, I try to stand up, “what’s this? you got a little fight left in you, eh?” he taunts me, I look over to Onmei and I see Katsu throwing him around not giving Onmei anytime to react. I see Onmei trying to create shields with ice but Katsu is too fast. I try to see Suki and I do, she is fighting Yosuke and by the looks she is also losing. “This….. is…. boring me” I utter and start to laugh, I actually don’t know why I am laughing, I am in so much pain. I look up at him and his face seems puzzled, I smile at him and launch my body at him, my forehead directly connecting with his, “Hi!” I say to him. I shut my eyes and open them again this time I am a few meters behind him. I whistle at him to catch his attention. He turns to me, and I smile at him. Konome dashes towards me, I jump back, and then I feel him behind me, I teleport this time landing near one of the swords I dropped earlier. I take my sleeve and wipe the blood off my face, as I go to pick up the sword, Konomes hands grab my face and slam it into the wall. “Hey,” he whispers in my ear, “look over there…” I look in the direction he is pointing and I see Katsu a few metres away from Onmei drawing his sword, “your friend is going to die!” as soon as he said that I saw the flicker of Katsus speed, “NO” I scream, just then I am right beside Onmei and Katsu, I feel Onmeis blood splatter on my face. I unsheathe a sword and swing it at Katsu, I miss. I grab Onmei as he falls, “Onmei!” I scream as his body goes limp in my arms, my body goes weak as I look over to the trio of boys high fiving each other, Suki must have lost, or unable to fight. I stand leaving Onmeis body, I walk towards the trio, until Konome notices me. I feel a surge of power go through me, I bolt at them and they put their guard up. Konome was the first to advance, he extends his arm to grab me as I throw my sword up in the air I teleport to the side of his arm, reacquire my sword and severe his arm with it. He falls to the ground thriving in pain. I have no remorse my target isKatsu, he is going to die for what he did. Yosuke approaches me laughing, “aww are you trying to avenge your –“ I teleport in front of him grabbing his mouth to shut him up and slam him into the ground breaking his spine. I continue walking towards Katsu, my mind feels empty and dark. “Please Im sorry, its just a game, I didn’t –“ this time I teleport directly behind him grabbing his mouth and pulling him back into my sword, “a game is it..” I murmer as my sword enters his heart, “ I win”. I let go of him and his body drops to the ground. Everything is hazy and then all goes black. Chapter 4: The Promise I wake abruptly, like jumping out of a nightmare. I see Suki sitting beside the bed I was laying in. Her eyes looks as though she pities me. “What?” I ask her, her eyes fall to her hands “Your hair…”. I was confused by what she meant by that, but then it struck me, I ran to a mirror to see my hair. The ends of my hair were cobalt black and the rest going white. I look at Suki. “What happened to me!?” “You killed him…” Suki mumbles. I killed him? I killed who? My brain aches for the answer and then like a dam opening the flood gets all the memories poured into my brain, the sorrow, the guilt, the anger. I promised to protect Onmei and I couldn’t. I look up at Suki, her eyes still on her hands, “Look at me!” I plead with her, is there darkness in me, is that why my hair is like this. Why are the other parts going white. I couldn’t think of that now, “Suki…” I whisper softly at her,”Suki..” I say a bit louder, her head turns to me, “We have another fight coming up, we need to get ready.” I turn back to the mirror, I feel my heart drop into my stomach and I have chose my path. I am not light, I am not dark, I am the shade in the middle that keeps both at bay, I am the one with morals but yet lack the understanding of them. I will never, never, let another friend die. Even if I have to kill to protect them. [/spoiler] There will be more at a later date I would also love feedback as this is an actual story I am writing sorry my entry is so long.
  2. OMG GunThug! I love you! You were an EDITOR! I have a story I want you to look at if thats ok, and I have the perfect thing to right! Thanks for this competition! My post will be up soon! How do I make a spoiler?
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