DoubleJ Posted April 29, 2015 Share Posted April 29, 2015 When you sit at the window what do you see Do you see the trees with their limbs swaying in the breeze Do you see the people walking, waiting, living Do you see the rhythm Sitting at the window all I see The lonely fields The empty bench A moment passing by A moment without you Forever and into the next YagamiNoir, Kiliminati, Kyokatsu and 4 others 7 Link to comment
YagamiNoir Posted April 29, 2015 Share Posted April 29, 2015 Deep stuff man, deep stuff. Makes me inclined to make one of these as well. DoubleJ 1 Link to comment
Kiliminati Posted April 29, 2015 Share Posted April 29, 2015 Made me re-evaluate my life ... [spoiler]:P nice poem yo[/spoiler] Link to comment
ThinkNice Posted April 30, 2015 Share Posted April 30, 2015 empty bench, time to put some plates on 'em shervinz, DoubleJ and Misfire33 3 Link to comment
BlitzRival Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Doesn't rhyme. I think you just broke your poem m8. Link to comment
Misfire33 Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Doesn't rhyme. I think you just broke your poem m8. Poems don't have to rhyme Every single fucking time. It's not a rule, It's not even cool; Sometimes it's just a snooze When authors would rather rhyme than choose The right goddamn words to use. [spoiler][media]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_DZBxsMHVGY[/media][/spoiler] Bimps1002 1 Link to comment
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