Thank you, Moetal, for the feedback. I have tried to incorporate most of your suggestions and come up with this:
Added black outline to leg/hair, added eyebrow/lash and slimmed the hair a little although it looks a little awkward. I might've messed up on the body enlargement, I'm not sure.
And yes, I intended for the bangs to be over the eyes but if there's a problem with that then I'll try to change that as well.