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AzizFTW

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  1. "The usage of Spore on Ekans and Arbok is banned." Why?
  2. Only signed up for it 'cause I had to for Youtube.
  3. About the left scene, it's the final mission in MW2. It's after you kill Shepherd after a knife to the eye and Nikolai (I think it is) lands with a blackbird and saves you.
  4. I'll have to say, the writing events are great but I feel as if they're too pokémon based. Yeah, it's a Pokémon forum but it's nice to have some variety. Eventhough there's only been two writing events I think there'll be more pokémon based writing events. Something like an open category would be nice. For example, 1000 word limit story about anything. Thanks. :3
  5. oh god. I'm going to regret this but I'm going to fully launch myself into this. I really should think this out Urh, also, developing your character throughout the story is quite important too. Otherwise you'd be stuck to a pretty tight template you will have to follow so yeah.
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    Laidback Zone

    plot twist you don't have a sister
  7. AzizFTW

    Laidback Zone

    [spoiler] Your father. [/spoiler]
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    Laidback Zone

    It costs 825 PokéYen to buy a super repel? I'm out.
  9. Thanks a lot! c: I'll make adjustments to the original peice and I'll see if it 'works'. 1) I'll add in the comma. 2) He describes the people as fair because it's a nice town, the people live in harmony with each other and rarely cause problems. They treat each other equally and without prejudice. 3) I'll remove the name. 4) I'll change the fourth paragraph. 5) I'll make changes to the description of Lyn. Forgot to change her name as 'Lyn' was her name in the draft... I'll probably develop the characters and surroundings much more before fully launching the story into the plot. Thanks a lot for the reply!
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    Laidback Zone

    Cipher, what happened? O_O
  11. AzizFTW

    Laidback Zone

    If that does ever happen, this would be Walrus.
  12. AzizFTW

    Laidback Zone

    2sexy4uscrubs u srs
  13. This is the story I will be working on throughout the next couple of months/weeks. I will be trying my best to finish these as soon as possible. I hope you enjoy reading these and will leave criticism behind. Thank you and enjoy! :3 Prologue [spoiler] "Check," said Lyn in an assured and confident voice, with a smile running across her blemishless face. Returning to her position, she carefully observed my moving hand and remained silent, careful not to give any of her so called 'flawless' and 'valuable' tactics away. I attempted to move my king one space to the right, but ceased to do so as she chuckled under her breath. We sat silently in the room, calm, and focused on the chess game. A single sheet of snow fell upon the town of Handsworth, leaving only the lights visible. Silent: the town stayed, through the rest of the morning and evening. It was the typical weather, snowing right through December. Living in the town at the time felt as if it was lifeless - as if you were the only humans in the town of Handsworth. Though, through every other month of the year, the town was copacetic.The people of the town were kind, generous, and fair. In the pitch black sky, a single slit of bright light cut through the blinds and shone down upon Lyn's white king piece. The light focused itself on Lyn's king piece, moving gently from one side to another, then vanishing into thin air. As I peered outside, I saw nothing but the pitch black sky and the town of Handsworth. I then returned to the chess game... "Mate," said Lyn, as she cried in excitement. She lifted herself from her chair and danced in unmitigated joy and delectation. She prided herself on her sportsmanship, sincerity, and virtues. Lyn was candour; she would never lie under any circumstance. She was honest, reliable, and always tranquil. During every single second of every single hour, she would be euphoric; bursting with energy. As I peered once more out of the window, I saw nothing but a lifeless town, silent, and still. [/spoiler]
  14. AzizFTW

    Laidback Zone

    #1 Unwritten Rule of OT: Fun doesn't exist in PokéMMO. Now, repeat after me.
  15. On a scale of 1 to 10, how dope do I look?

    1. TheGloriousWalrus

      TheGloriousWalrus

      Holy shit you look like some poor indian beggar kid, aziz pls

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  16. This game's community is falling apart faster than me playing Jenga.

  17. The suspense built up in chapter six pays off greatly. It's great. Though I think more character development would pay be awesome. Rating: 8/10
  18. About that. I'm suprised people still play this horrible amazing game.
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