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[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Sure, I can see the softer shading being nice. I find the shading on the horsea to be nice. But I think something is off about the shading on seadra's frontsprite hair. It lacks depth. Perhaps shifting the colors around rather than re-coloring would fix that. The fan is not really 2D. If you look at kingdra's backsprite you can see the base of the fan. I imagine the idea is something like temari's fan, so it's probably at least as thick as an arm. And most arms require shading. That being said the end part of the fan in frontsprite/backsprite don't match, but that's probably intentional. Hmm... I still think the lower half of kingdra's face can be more moe. The top half is good though. But perhaps this is just an opinion thing. -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@CrookedWings427 Feel free to ignore anything I say. The horsea line (especially seadra) might benefit by making the shading a little more pronounced. Right now the shades blue you're using are pretty similar so it looks a little flat. Also where the lighting is coming from is kind of ambiguous. (See the lighting on Magi's Gardevoir) Edit: might as well copy past it in if I'm referencing it. Edit2: other comments - The dark part of seadra's hair in the front sprite looks weird to me. Probably mostly because I can't figure out how the hair is supposed to be hanging. - The edges of kingdra's fan (not the pointy edges, the long straight edge) needs some shading. It looks very 2D. - For some reason kingdra's face doesn't look very moe. Maybe you could try to go for the four lines face that Magi posted about before? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Minor edits. Edit: Tried some hair edits/ making the hair lighting more consistent with backpack lighting. Better/worse? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Are there forgotten/backlogged sprites I can try to help with? Since anything other than concept work is beyond my current spriting ability. Edit: Maybe bellsprout or abra family? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
>.< The idea is wiggly giving a curtsy but I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Jigglypuff! It looks slightly(very) off but hopefully good enough for a rough idea? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@laGashetaHardcore Less spiky? mini-edit -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@laGashetaHardcore But I think jiggly is the more swirly one =/ Clefairy is slightly spiky because of claws + horn + being star shaped -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Tried a non-swirl hair clefairy. Mostly because my image of clefairy goes something like... pink -> round -> spiky/star -> hair swirl -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@laGashetaHardcore I tried moving the hands out. The quality is worse and the hand is not cute, but I think the pose is cuter? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
#NotSureIfHelping.jpeg -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Alright so I tried a thing @Moetal @laGashetaHardcore Slightly more dynamic. I couldn't get the skirt pleats quite right =/ -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
More experimentation like/dislike? preferences? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
There was an attempt. -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@Moetal Perhaps these are more magneton like? Do you think the base sprite is fine or should I try another base sprite? Edit: Tried to make her a little bigger Edit2: More bigger. I should try to put the arms back in =/ -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@Moetal better...? :< arms... -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@Kickern Tried to fix the eyes. Not sure if I succeeded @.@ Edit2: I have no idea Hugging backpack? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
>.< I tried... something. I can't hair, or hands, or legs or... ...better arms/hands? -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@laGashetaHardcore Cute! @Kickern Hmm sounds interesting I could give it a try (it will all be super rough like the magnemite because I'm pretty bad at pixel art) -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
@Moetal I tried to make it to sort of match the magneton that's been floating around. More... backpack like? (Not sure if better) Maybe I could add the socks from the other magnemite draft? (I already stole the headband) -
[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)
Majena replied to Moetal's topic in Client Customization
Magnemite?