I watched the whole video without having any interest in lucky eggs or pay day farming and I did it only because of your voice and narration style. So, that's a plus. You have a great voice for narration so I'd suggest building on it.
Since you're making tutorial style content (I assume), I would have liked to see more infographics and smoother transitions. It just gives more visual appeal than just the game itself. You want people to stay and watch till the end so more graphics will definitely help.
Also, your narration is very monotone. I'd suggest adding intonations when necessary. Not too much that it hits the point of being egregious, but just enough so that the viewer isn't bored out of their mind in the first minute.
Good luck! ^^