Darkflame411

So it looks okay?? And yeah I got that "broken" feeling too. I knew it was the face but I suck at them and couldn't make it look right no matter how much I tried. Nice change to the hair looks more appealing I think. Is the design okay overall?

Thank ya! I was going for a kind of acolyte/priestess/cultist look. Priestess of order mayhaps?

Okay yeah scratch that, I forgot just how tough this stuff is. Drew up a quick design for a Kabuto thingie and attempted to make a test sprite for it, turned out just awful. Gonna need to practice before I can be of any use x-x [spoiler][/spoiler] I drew out a doodle of the design quickly before attempting the sprite but just blegh. [spoiler][/spoiler]

Lazy butt who's vanished for oh so long after only contributing to one sprite really, returning, what gen1 pokemon have yet to have anything done on them at all? I think I might be slightly better at this now than I was before...maybe. Got tied up with school stuff and kinda forgot to come back here, recently saw the doduo sprite which looks so much better now than what I left it as and it inspired me to come back and say hello!

@ Moetal Sorry for the slow reply, I was going for a kind of "tripping" image for her. Also I don't feel like I have much else i could really add to that Doduo sprite that wouldn't be a downgrade.

here ya go @Chras Thank you! I think I'm getting the hang of drawing on such a small scale now.

made a new back sprite for it, I'm kind of proud of it X_x but doing hands with any detail at this size is really difficult for me so you might want to fix her crab claw.

Okay here's my second attempt at a bit more of an interesting pose alongside your edited backsprite. X_x

@Moetal Is this any better? Also tried a shiny sprite attempt @Crazydodapie Sorry for a lack of quality I'm just starting out with this stuff and wanted to try practising. I have to start with something

Bwah here's my Doduo very very slightly altered *just the blue lowerpart of the skirt fixed a tiny error* as well as my very first attempt at a backsprite. Behold the hideousness!

I tried using blue for the contrast but I dunno if it stands out too much

Right-o I decided to just scrap that for now and wanted to try a different pokemon before going back to the Sandshrew. So here is my shot at a Doduo. Figured It'd be easier to get my head off that image if I tried something completely different. [URL=http://s183.photobucket.com/user/rin345/media/Doduosprite128_zps70b49533.png.html][/URL]

How is this? [URL=http://s183.photobucket.com/user/rin345/media/Alternatesandshrew2128_zps03ec7ea9.png.html][/URL] It's starting to look a bit like Marisa from Touhou

Buwah, can't stop myself xD I want to have at least a half decent first attempt at this.

Is this better? This is my last attempt for tonight