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''Master Yi''
LOL
riot remade him to be the most OP champ to ever have existed in the game.
Fusing AP Yi and AD Yi together was their worst choice yet
GG riot

''Master Yi''
LOL
riot remade him to be the most OP champ to ever have existed in the game.
Fusing AP Yi and AD Yi together was their worst choice yet
GG riot

Brace for incoming criticism.
First off, I really enjoyed reading your story!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Who saved Alyssa?  Is there a way to stop the monsters for good?
Originally I was going to say I didn't care for how you've centered the story, but after reading through a few more times I've decided it works surprisingly well.  Intentional or not, it reads somewhat like free verse.  I like it.
There's just a few things I want to point out that might help you moving forward:
You're telling the readers what's happening, and this is fine, but it would be more effective if you showed us.  It might take longer to write, but it reads a bit smoother. Don't tell us she's a great archer, show us how she handles her bow, etc. There are one or two instances where you switch between present and past tense (Chapter 1 has a couple of these.) "Alyssa had long pink hair...  She often hunts down monsters..." While I really like some of your descriptions, in some cases you don't go into very much depth.  Tell us about the unknown forest, tell us more about the village being attacked, how it smelled, heat of the fire, etc. In any case, I can't wait to read more!
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Just for the record, I'm not trying to be mean; I really do look forward to reading what is posted in the writing section and I want to encourage more people to write their own stories.  Helping people who are willing to listen is all I intend to do.  pls don't hate me.
But you don't have to listen to a word I say if you don't want to.  It's your story, tell it how you want.  
What do I know, anyway?   ;)
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Chapter 1 - The Beginning
 
Alyssa came home from hunting , She puts the dead animals she would make a meal of later
 and her bow and arrows on the table outside
and proceeds to walk into her home.
.She lived by herself in a small wooden house on a mountain , Surrounded by a forest as far as the eye could see.
She then walks to her dresser and pulls out a picture of a family , the edge of the picture is burned.
She sits down on the wooden couch she made.
Teardrops roll down her cheeks onto the picture.
''I promise you.. I will make this world a peaceful place again.. I promise you.. ''
 
 
Alyssa was a young girl , she was 16 years old and was a really good archer.
Although she lived alone in a world which wasn't as peaceful as it used to be , She tried to make the best of it.
Alyssa had long pink hair , blue eyes and was quite small for her age .
She often hunts down monsters to keep her house safe , and to take revenge for the terrible things they did to her in the past.
She promised her family to make the world peaceful again , Without Pain , Without Unhappyness , Without Sadness
Without these pesky monsters.
 
-10 years earlier-
 
Alyssa once had a family , A father and a mother, and a little sister.
They lived so happily together untill her dad , who was the most skilled archer in the entire region and her mom , who was a very skilled Priestess, had to join a war , to fight off the evil creatures that appeared after a big earthquake 1000 years ago. People said portals to the underworld were opened , and so the evil creatures could come to the world we once knew to be peaceful and quiet , Every 100 years a big wave of these evil creatures appear in the peaceful world we call Lydra , Every 100 years the best mages , fighters , clerics , archers and assasins are being send to the front lines to fight off the evil creatures who destroy the peaceful world Lydra , But this time... The tide decided to take a turn for the worse.
Her father , who was the best marksman in the entire region joined the front lines.
And so did her mother , as a beautiful priestess , aiding her dad in the front lines.
 
But....
 
The waves kept coming and the monsters kept growing stronger.
Before they knew , Many lives were lost,  Including her mother and father.
The little child we know as The Lonely Archer was very scared.
She was hiding in her home , located in the middle of the town called Ports of Labrantia
She heard terrible screaming outside . People screaming for help and crying of pain.
Houses were being burned down and destroyed by the evil creatures who already invaded the town she lived in.
Then suddenly one of the evil creatures broke down the door of the house she was hiding in.
The poor little girl ran upstairs and heard her little baby sister crying loudly , she ran into her baby sisters room and grabbed her , She quickly broke down the window with a chair and proceeded to jump out of the window.
The height was higher then she thought it would be.
Her leg was injured , But she had to keep being strong for her little sister.
She saw the terror of people being ripped apart by these creatures , People who were on fire.
And the remaining heroes fighting for their world .
''Hey kid! Get out of here!''
The girl looked up , and there she saw a man , He looked like he was in his teenage years.
He was holding a long sword , with on the end black blood from the monsters.
He then proceeded to point in the direction of a huge forest
And gave her a little push.
Running for the life of her little sister and herself , she fled into a forest
She didn't know what happened to her mother and father either.
 
After running for a while , she crushed down , in the middle of an unknown forest .
She cried loudly while holding her little baby sister who was only 3 months old close to her.
She was only 6 years old  back then , Yet she had to face such tragedy.
What future would her and her little baby sister have?
Confused and scared she shouted :
''MOMMY!! DADDY!!! WHERE ARE YOU!!!?''
 
-Chapter 1 , End-
 
Chapter 2 - The Unknown Forest

The little girl was sitting on the muddy ground , confused and scared.
She looked down into the eyes of her little baby sister , She had beautiful blue eyes , just like herself.
Her hands slowly stroke through her little baby sisters, short , blue hair.
She then realized she needed to be stronger ''I have to be strong for my little sister!''
''I can't.. Just keep crying and hoping that my mom and dad will come by any moment''
''I have to be strong...''
And with those words , She stood up , Even though her ankle was still injured from the jump , She kept walking forward
With her little sister on her back.
It was so dark in the forest that she couldn't see anything.
Suddenly , She heard a high pitched sound comming from behind her.
''Kreeeeeeeeeeghhh''
''EEEKKK!!''
The girl fell down and her baby sister started crying.
Infront of the girl was one of the evil creatures she saw back in the village.
It had a pale white snake-like body , a gaping hole which looked like its mouth.
In that hole there were 5 rows of sharp razor teeth , it also had 1 big red eye
The girl stood up immediatly and started running.
But then.. Tentacles rose out of the evil creatures mouth and strangled her little baby sister on her back.
Ripping it off her back.
The girl reached out her hand , Trying to grab her little baby sister.
But the evil creature pulled her away too quickly.
She fell and could only watch ..
Watch how her own little sister got ripped apart and eaten.
She was frozen solid , Still sticking out her hand while her eyes were full of terror and of extreme sadness.
Slowly tears came rolling down her cheeks.
''No.... No... NO NO NO!!!! ''
The monster was making a gurgling sound while it swallowed the remains of her little baby sister.
The monster then contineud to come closer to the girl who was frozen solid on the ground , still reaching out her hand.
''This...This can't be...''
The tentacles were slowly wrapping around the girl on the ground who was still in shock.
 
All of a sudden Several firebolts struck the monster , The Tentacles which were being wrapped around the girl.
Suddenly fell apart , leaving blood stains everywhere.
Making the girl free from the grip of the tentacles.
The girl fainted , The last thing she could remember before fainting , was a figure.. A figure who killed the monster.
''Why... Why had this had to happen''
She quietly says these words before fainting.
-Chapter 2 - The End-
 
-To Be Contineud-
In the next chapter she finds out who the figure was who saved her.
You find out more about ''The Lonely Archer'' , The girl who lost her little baby sister in a tragic event.
And the last chapter which takes place in the past.
The chapters after this one will take place in the normal time.
Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 will be part of a flashback.

Well ATM , it isnt really going good in love for me. My bf is extremely rude and has this big attitude , but he ends up apologizing everytime when he hurts me with his words. And it keeps going and going and im just getting tired of it... Maybe we shud just be friends. Its scary how much this song is right about the issues im having atm in my relation.
http://youtu.be/VoPzP-MwcLI

So, I was just browsing around on MyAnimeList reading the latest news to see this.
 
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[/spoiler]It's been a while since I laughed so hard.

[spoiler]This is sadder.

 
She isn't putting enough hip into it. So sad.[/spoiler]

https://forums.pokemmo.eu/index.php?/topic/29666-warning-stalker-ish-person-active-on-forums/
https://forums.pokemmo.eu/index.php?/topic/29560-poem-what-i-wanna-be-when-i-grow-up/
https://forums.pokemmo.eu/index.php?/topic/28670-why-cant-people-act-normal/

they can strike at any time

You've made so many shit threads for attention that I nearly had a brain aneurysm from laughing so hard at your hypocrisy.

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I dont even know.

Not enough boobies for me

IGN: Mewaki
Pokemon : Roselia
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Proof:
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Pokemon : Pachirisu
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All finished , Enjoy ^_^!

I would say that my Japanese is quite good for someone who's lived here for only one year. I studied for a couple of years prior to coming. My goal is to become "fluent" during my time here but I've come to realize I have the rest of my life to become fluent. At this point, I can pretty much do anything I need to do. The other day, I called my insurance company to file a claim and later that night, discussed politics with some old men (one of whom was a politician apparently). I never claim to be fluent, but I'm only starting to realize that I'm getting there. The list of 2,000 or so kanji is sort of a rough estimate and doesn't truly represent any practical command over the language. If it were, it would be kind of like if someone took 5,000 of the statistically most commonly used words in English and said you had to know all of them to be fluent in English. (Apparently, I just looked it up and such lists exist: http://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/common-words-5000.htm You can probably become fluent by most accounts without knowing quite a lot of the words at the bottom of this list.) In reality, the amount of kanji that you encounter in real life is much more than 2,000, not limited to the official list, and you find that the more rare kanji on the list are not as common as it appears. I just practice by reading newspapers; I understand the ideas of all the articles I read and most of the details if I read it hard enough. It's just learning vocab at this point and I don't worry myself with the amount of kanji I know.
 
And yeah, I'm here through the JET Program so that's why I'm on a random small island in the middle of the ocean that no one has ever heard of. It does get lonely though. I'm the only foreigner here, so I have no choice but to level up my Japanese.
 
 
 
いや、別に注目を求めていないけど、自己紹介する時、普通に「I'm from _____.」とか、「I live in _____.」と言わないでしょうか？この場合、私は日本に暮らしていることは否定できないものじゃないですか？ PandyBearさんのプロフィールページによると、あなたはオランダに住んでいる日本人だそうですね。それは素晴らしいです。やっぱり日本語で話すのが必要ではないですね。 このメッセージ以外、誰かに英語で話しかけられたら、もちろん互いに英語で答えて、日本語だったら同じように日本語で答えますよ。リアルでも一緒です。それでも、もし私は日本人だったら、最初に日本人同士でいつも通りに日本語で喋らないですか？じゃ、必要はなくても、なぜ今日本語で書いてるのと思っているかもしれませんね。それは、もし恐らく私の言葉を信じてなければ、私の日本語能力について疑いがあれば、ちょっと分かりやすくするため、ちゃんと日本語で伝えようかなと思っていただけですね～。　 ^_^
 
とにかく、PandyBearさん、KONICHIWA. ^__________^ 　これからよろしくね～
 
In English:
 
No, I wasn't particularly looking for attention, but when you introduce yourself, wouldn't it be normal to say "I'm from ________." or "I live in _______."? In my case, the fact that I live in Japan isn't something that you can really deny, right? According to your profile, it seems that you're a Japanese person living in the Netherlands. That's wonderful! It seems like I don't have to write in Japanese after all. Except for this message, if someone comes and talks to me in English, of course I'll reply back in English to them in return. If it's Japanese, then I'll reply in Japanese the same way. I do the same in real life as well. Even so, if I were actually a Japanese person, wouldn't it be typical to speak first in Japanese as Japanese people usually do? Well, you might be wondering why I'm writing in Japanese now then. The reason is that just in case you don't believe what I'm saying or you have doubts about my Japanese ability, I thought I would make myself more easily understood if I spoke in Japanese instead is all. ^_^
 
Anyway, PandyBear, KONICHIWA. ^__________^  It's quite nice to meet you!

I dont even know.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLF4qC9ZGDQ
 
Hey guys! Enjoy this amazing preview of pokemon X and Y~
It includes some battles , poke-mii , and other stuff so check it out :3
Im really excited for this game already cus it looks so much better then the previous games<3
I will prolly be stuck in the beginning forever playing around with poke-mii lol
Also  , I'm happy that they are giving torchic (favourite starter cus its simply adorable)

Let me tell you the story of my 18th birthday.  It contains heavy use of drugs and alcohol, as well as a surprise twist ending. It also contains one of the most terrifying and unpleasant mornings of my life.
 
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I turned 18 in my freshman year of college.  Being the youngest of my friends, they continued to tell me that they would ensure I had the night of my life.  At some point, I'm not entirely sure when, they decided that 'night of my life' = 'hire me a stripper'.  I was not amused, as I find strippers, and strip clubs, to be rather gross. This continued for several months, with me continually begging for them to *not* hire a stripper, and them getting more and more set on the idea.  So the day of my 18th birthday arrived (it was a Monday) and my friends decided that I needed to enjoy the day.  I agreed.  My last class was done at noon, and walking out of Chem 101 I was greeted by my friends holding a case of beer and a 5th of vodka.  
 
**Side Note - My school is a wet campus and has an excessively liberal policy towards public drinking and drunkenness, regardless of the age of the individual in question.
 
My friends and I wandered through campus, drinking casually and stopping to play the odd game of beer pong along the way.  Upon arriving at my room, with a significantly smaller amount of alcohol, we encountered another group of my friends waiting with more alcohol and (I hope you guessed it) my best friend in the world, the ever lovely Mary Jane.  This continued for some time, with most of us being quite impaired by 5 PM.  We then went to dinner (and snuck some beer in to go along with the meal) and were eventually kicked out for playing BP in the cafeteria.  We then returned to visit my good friend, and drink some more, and htis continued throughout the night.  Miraculously, no one vomited.  Around 10 pm rolled around and my friends told me that I should eat some Tums.  I didn't really want to, because they taste gross and I didn't know why they wanted me to.  They convinced me, saying that it would make me feel better in the morning.  I'm not entirely sure why I believed them.  They then told me to take a nap, because at midnight they were going to take me to a strip club.  I said no, I'm just going to sleep.  So by 11 pm I was in bed, fast asleep.
 
I woke up the next day around 8 AM.  I quickly decided that class at 9:30 was going to be iffy at best.  No, I wasn't hungover.  I was still drunk.  Very, very drunk.  I sat up, looked around the room, and noticed a strange pink thing on the floor.  I half slid, half fell out of bed and went to investigate.  It was a pair of pink lace panties.  I was quite confused, as you might imagine, as there was no evidence of a girl having been in there the night before.  I looked over to my room mate's bed to see if she was there, but he was sleeping alone.  I left them alone (because honestly, I'm not gonna touch that shit until I know where it came from) and went over to my desk to check my phone.  It was there that I found a VIP card to the local strip club that said "Call me sweety <3 XXX-XXX-XXXX (number withheld)".  At this point I was both confused and quite terrified.  I then took a shower, went to breakfast, and managed to go to class.
 
After wasting an hour and a half in class (because honestly, I have no clue what they said there) and feeling the hangover starting to set in I went back to my room. My room mate had just woken up so I asked him what had happened the night before.  He looked at me and said
 
"Dude, I can't even talk about it. Just ask  Luke (name changed)".  Luke was our 'suitemate' (there were 4 rooms that shared one bathroom, called a 'suite') who was with us the night before.  I went back to sleep, and woke up a little before lunchtime.  Luke was just getting back from class and I asked him what had happened the night before.  He told me to sit down.  I did, more nervous than ever.  He asked what I remembered, and I told him what I've told you all so far.  He asked, "That's it?".  
 
"Yup".
 
"Oh boy.  Well first of all, remember that Tums?" I nod. "Well that was Ecstasy."  
 
"What the fuck."
 
"Oh it gets better.  We came back at midnight, as promised, and took you to the strip club"
 
"Bullshit"
 
"Yeah man, we did." He shows me pictures of a group of my friends outside the strip club, and inside with the bouncer.  "We all chipped in and got you a bottle of champagne and a private stripper.  You were in there for two hours, and when you came back she came with you."
 
"SHE WHAT?"
 
"Yeah man, it was fucking weird.  She came back to your dorm room, went inside with you for a while, then came back out like an hour later. We asked her what happened but she wouldn't reply"
 
"No fucking way."
 
"No bullshit man."
 
At this point I was freaking out.  Had I had sex with a stripper the night before? I start digging around the room, looking for evidence that I at least had used a condom... Nothing.  I'm not nearly crying, and I called the student health services to schedule an appointment for an STD test.  Still completely shell-shocked, we go to lunch.  There some people came up to me, making small-talk, asking how my birthday was, saying they had heard that my night was... 'interesting' to say the least.  The whole time I'm thinking to myself "Jesus Christ people know about this? I wasn't gonna tell anyone, ever!".  We sit down for lunch, but I'm not hungry. I just push my food around my plate until Luke says to me, "Dan, we did exaggerate what happened last night a little."  My heart soars.
 
"How so?"
 
"Well for one, we didn't give you Ecstasy.  And secondly, we never took you to a strip club.  You just went to sleep."
 
"So... I *didn't* sleep with a stripper last night?"
 
"Unless you snuck her in later, you're in the clear."
 
I literally shout, "FUCK YOU LUKE" to the entire cafeteria and get kicked out for the second day in a row.  I then cancel my appointment with student health and feel better than I have in weeks.  I'm told later that they did in fact go to the strip club and take the pictures, and they did get a stripper to sign the VIP card, and they borrowed pink panties from a female friend.  Incidentally, the original plan was to have me wake up to said female friend in my bed, but she decided she didn't want to do it (and honestly I'm ok with that, it would have been even stranger and more unnerving).  
 
So TL;DR - my friends played an excellent practical joke on me, making me think my life was ruined. Happy 18th birthday to me.[/spoiler]
 
If you didn't read it, go back and fucking read it cuz its a funny story.
 
PS - this story is 100% true