Kickern Posted September 26, 2016 Share Posted September 26, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 @laGashetaHardcore Hardcore's edit to her face looked good, but I think her face is supposed to be off at an angle, not straight forward. Edit: Just noticed her right (our left) shoulder shouldn't be bare. Don't know what I'm doing. On the right one, I added a little bit of her right ear that I think should be showing. Edit2: More minor changes. Edited September 27, 2016 by Kickern CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
Arisa Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 @CrookedWings427 Is this what you based the design on? Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @Arisa All good edits, except I'm personally not a fan of the fang; it doesn't really suit the Eevee line, IMO. But whatever, it's a matter of personal preference at that point. Anyways, what do we think about making her a bit more flat-chested like in the artwork? Maybe I'm just on an anti-melons kick... Edited September 27, 2016 by Kickern razielhd 1 Link to comment
Arisa Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @Kickern No fang is fine ^^ I'm okay with a flatter chest. Edit: The sleeve is killing me. Edited September 27, 2016 by Arisa CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
burningscarlet Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 @Moetal TYRANNY! Well, I was mostly joking around anyway. Although my preferences do sway towards bigger busts I can fall in line with the consensus that moe is above all else since that was my original intention anyway. For right now I guess I'll just go back to lurking until there's something I can contribute to. melonlords are gone but not forgotten Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @Kickern Thanks ^-^ Black Umbreon it is! Flat chested works for me :) and yes her head is at an angle. Also she used to have a right ear 0-0 it must have been phased out in edits. It was more visible in the blonde edit. Nice edits ^-^ im glad shes liked xD @Arisa Yup thatd be my reference ^-^" Nice edits! Does anyone else feel like her right arm should be doing something? So much blank space xD Edited September 27, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @Arisa Better? @CrookedWings427 IDK, maybe she could be holding something with her right hand? I'm not sure what, though. Edited September 27, 2016 by Kickern Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 @Arisa @Kickern Now that im on break and can really look it looks like somewhere along the line the hair broke. On the left of her head where the half ear is i think the spike should be readded, even if it has to move up. You can see it better on the blonde so ill use it for reference. The design of her hair is very simple so the two spikes make it cuter imo. Also if we're going with black umbreon ill have to make certain edits since it was a quick alternative. 1 hour ago, Kickern said: IDK, maybe she could be holding something with her right hand? I'm not sure what, though. Ive been thinking about it for hours o-e Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 27, 2016 Author Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) Umbreon's upper body seems large compare to her lower body. The overall shoulders/rib cage seem really wide. EDIT: Her left leg is strangely positioned also, seems her knee is too far out to the left and too low. Edited September 27, 2016 by Moetal Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) Made some quick edits Her butts too big now and i put no detail back in ^-^" like i said, quick. Gotta get back to work. Edit More edits @laGashetaHardcore Isnt this a little close to meowths base? Edited September 27, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 @CrookedWings427 I don't know, My Electrike only have the meowth hand :/ Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @laGashetaHardcore Its looks like the face and legs are also the same but flipped, other than the winking eye. (I dont think that meowth is the final, not sure) Edited September 27, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 27, 2016 Share Posted September 27, 2016 (edited) @ CrookedWings427 este es mi Electrike: / edición Edited September 27, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
anjelocarreon Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 (edited) Maybe a little younger for the evolved eevees IMO... My reason is: even though they are final evolutions it is still their second evolution, right? Edit: Oh BTW Manectric looks water type to me. Edited September 28, 2016 by anjelocarreon Link to comment
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Moetal Posted September 28, 2016 Author Share Posted September 28, 2016 This is what we had in the patch. I've just touched up some anatomy stuff. Open mouth or smiile are both fine. Like 24 colors and mixed up palettes. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 ignore me :p razielhd 1 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 @Moetal @anjelocarreon The problem is the original Pokemon designs for Electrike and Manectric not looking like electric types to begin with. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 28, 2016 Author Share Posted September 28, 2016 @laGashetaHardcore If the old face ain't broken, don't change it. razielhd 1 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 @Moetal I love it now Link to comment
Zawerni Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 Moved the thingy down. Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 Trying stuff: razielhd and CrookedWings427 2 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 28, 2016 Share Posted September 28, 2016 (edited) I think meowths old face is better I just see rectangle when i look at the opened mouth one. Espeons ponytail is really cute doh ;-; I was just going to take the old one and bend the legs. The old espeon was a favorite. Maybe something like this for meowth? -> Edited September 28, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
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