[Romance][Drama][Comedy] Vanilla Sky Chapter 1

[Takens]

Chapter 1

Feelings

 

-         Will you go out with me?

I was witnessing a rejection right in front of my very eyes. Sora confessed to Hotaru now that’s something new.

-         Sorry, but I can’t do that right now there is someone I like.

 [Sora ran after being rejected]

-         Blum, how much did you hear?

-         Everything…

-         It doesn’t feel right, but there was no other choice

-         It all depends on what you feel

Hotaru started crying for a couple minutes asking himself why everything had to go that way.

-         Hotaru! The teacher wants to see you in her office

Rin is a girl, she can give some advice to Hotaru. I should probably talk to her I don’t think she hates me, right?

-         Hello, Rin have you ever confessed to someone?

-         Where did that question came from?

[Rin starts to blush]

-         I was being curious sorry to bother

-         Stop messing around with me!!!

Well that wasn’t helpful at all, how does anyone fall in love? And why? I just don’t understand that feeling.

-         Blum is that you?

-         Yes, what are you doing here big sister?

This is my sister Rea. She has been taken care of me after our parents died in a car accident.

-         I wanted to know how my little brother was doing at school that’s all

-         Stop treating me like a kid!

-         I can’t after all we have to take care of each other

-         I’ll be going to work make sure to cook something before I get home

She treats me like a spoiled child, but I can’t hate her after all she’s done for me.

-         Finally, is lunch time Blum

-         Are you having bread, or did you bring your own lunch?

-         I brought my own today

-         We should go to the roof I have to tell you something

I wonder what Hotaru wants to tell me after all this time we haven’t kept secrets from each other since we were kids.

-         Blum, I think I like Rin

-         Ohh! Really?

-         Yes, since the first moment I saw her I felt she was the one

This is the first time Hotaru has ever liked someone so I think I must support him however I can.

[Next day]

Today the school’s festival will start, as expected Hotaru will confess to Rin during the fireworks.

-         You look good Rin

-         You are beautiful girl!

I forgot our class was doing a maid café… I hope they don’t make me do..

-         Blum, don’t you think Rin looks cute in her made costume?

I turned around to see Rin. She was normally looking beautiful with her loose hair, but now she was using a pony tail.

[Blum blushes]

-         I guess she doesn’t look bad

-         Is that everything you are going to tell her?

-         I need to go and get the food ready

Why is this happening to me? I couldn’t give her a normal response. I couldn’t say she was pretty.

-         Are you ok Blum?

-         It looks like you are down for some reason.

-         I don’t know how to explain it, but I feel weird

-         What do you mean?

-         This is something new for me I’ve never been interested in someone

-         Not until now

-         I think i love Rin

I knew the problem I was getting into by telling Hotaru how I felt.

-         Don’t screw with me Blum you know what I feel

-         I know Is just that I never felt this way

-         Get away from us!

-         I will

[Both of them left their way]

-         I didn’t think you would be hiding here

-         Sora…

-         I heard everything, does he really like Rin?

-         Hotaru?

-         I’m afraid he does

She hasn’t given up after all.

-         What should I do Sora?

-         Don’t need to ask me

-         Just follow you heart

-         I don’t know how she feels and Hotaru…

-         If you tell her now you will be rejected, or she might respond to your feelings

-         Either way if you don’t do it Hotaru will and you will regret it all your life.

For being so young she knows what she is talking about.

-         Sora!

[I tried hiding behind the room]

-         Rin, what are you doing here?

-         I was looking for you

-         We need you help in the café

-         Wait, Rin

-         I need to ask you something

-         What is it?

-         Have you ever fallen in love?

[Rin remembers Blum asking the same question]

-         I did when I was a kid

-         Sadly, my family had to move out of this city

-         I came back to see if I could still find him

-         Rin, is that?

-         Yes, Sora it is him.

-         I found him

I want to know what they are talking about! This suck I need to hide while they are still here or else...

Now that I come to think something similar happened to me in the past. It was at the time I lost my parents. I would cry a lot because I felt lonely, but I met a girl and she changed my life completely.

It would be nice to see her again

 

[gaiterslabour]

You risk rejection if you let her know how you feel right now, or she may reciprocate your emotions. Or then Hotaru will do it, and you'll spend the rest of your life regretting it. Despite her tender years, she speaks with authority.

 

 

dordle
 

[quinns]

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