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Title : The Feature Creepening 2: Electric Boogaloo: Revengence IGN : Kingice Word Count : 1199 Starring Kingice as "CaptainBuggy" and CyberXIII as "CaptainKid" [spoiler] Revenge Of The CRIMSON Gemstone All we could hear was a door slowly creaking as a breeze blew through it. What horror awaits on the other side went through my mind, as I looked at my partner, a piece of me didn't want to go further... but instinctively he said "Oi CaptainBuggy, let's go". As I looked at the door creaking open and closed, many thoughts went through my mind... As we entered the cold dark room we saw her... She was just laying there on the ground Gray as Ash in the cold winter. The look on her face, the look of fear in her eyes that seem to pierce into the depths of my soul, I was frightened. Then CaptainKid said "Something feels off here ya know? Who would want to murder the Creepy Old Lady on Route 111 that helps young trainers on the way to Fallarbor Town..." As we stood there Looking for clues her body suddenly crumbled into Ash as though it were nothing but snow scattered in the winter wind, we stood in awe at what we witnessed. I said, "it could have been done by the Fire Type Poke'mon due to its location, it is possible." But after a second Look, there weren't any burn marks or scorches anywhere. "How can a body just crumble into ash, with no trace of fire or anything!" I exclaimed. As the ash became unsettled, due to the wind in the room, we saw a Crimson Gemstone where her body once lay... While we were capturing the scene in detail for the report, Officer Jenny came into the room and approached the Crimson Gemstone where the old lady once lay, as she picked it up the room filled with Mist and a Cold wind started to blow and the creaking door shut with a "Bang" as the lights went out. The sight we saw next was frightening, a shadowy figure appeared from the mist with Big Glowing Crimson Eyes as Officer Jenny let out a scream so terrifying it froze us in our place, then we heard a "Thud", as the mist began to fade we saw her as grey as ash "Just like the Old Lady" CaptainKid said. We sat there for a while contemplating what we had saw and how we were going to proceed, when we heard tale of a Exorcist in Lavender Town in Kanto and that a special device to enable one to see ghosts was being developed by Silph Co. We sent word to the Exorcist immediately and I went to have a meeting with the President of Silph Co. While I was on my way to Saffron City, CaptainKid went on an investigation on to who gave the old Lady the Crimson Gemstone. Lead after lead he failed until he got a tip off about a Fossil Maniac in Fallarbor Town. When CaptainKid got there it was a bit strange, he asked people if they have seen him around lately but all of them looking tired and drained, denied not seeing him lately. The town looked tired and gloomy, something must have happened he said. As he approached the Maniacs house something strange was happening there was a Foul Aura radiating from the house. As he rushed in he saw a young boy on the ground, as he rushed over to the boys aid he heard the boy say "Please... Sir... Help my brother... Something is... Wrong" then he collapsed, after getting the boy to Aid he went in to Confront the Maniac. As he entered the basement all you could hear was a faint knocking sound "Tik...Tik" in the distance. As CaptainKid got closer the sound got stronger and stronger until he saw a shadowy figure in the distance kneeling forward seeming as if he was trying to dig to the end of the earth... As CaptainKid got close enough to see the Maniac he called out to him "Oi, Fossil Maniac we need to talk" then the Maniac suddenly stopped digging... he slowly turned his head towards CaptainKid but his neck twitching and twitching, inch by inch as their eyes met Captainkid saw The Maniac was not himself his eyes Black as the night, then he Lunged at CaptainKid! CaptainKid Called out Gengar to aid him against this Menacing Maniac, Blow for blow they fought until help arrived. It was the Exorcist, sensing an Aura of darkness she charged in and helped subdue the Maniac. They questioned the Maniac and found out that he had Sold a rock with a slight Crimson Gemstone gleaming from within to the Old Lady a few years back, but it was still in cased in rock there was no gemstone. I was on my way back with the Silph Scope to Route 111 when I heard what had happened. We met up at the Pokemon Center in Fallarbor and together we went to the Old Lady's House on Route 111. As we started to draw closer and closer to the house the Exorcist seemed to get more and more anxious, talking to herself saying chants and stuff, it started to freak CaptainKid and Myself out quite a bit but we pressed on and on until we were right there in front of the house, then she Suddenly ceased all movement and started to mutter words to herself. Already creeped out we entered the house, all you could hear was the creaking door and the Exorcist muttering words to herself until we got to the Crimson Gemstone... It was laying there where if fell from Officer Jenny's grasp, the only source of light coming from the Moon through the broken window, at this point we were really frightened. Then the clouds started to cover the moon and the light began to fade when Exorcist went to the Crimson Gemstone and touched it... All of a sudden once again the room started to fill with Mist, but as the Shadowy Figure appeared The Exorcist Lunged toward it and they fought rigorously. The mist was fading fast and as the clouds past the moon the light began to become stronger and I used the Silph Scope to help us Identify the Culprit. It was a SABLEYE, It looked different than the normal one, its eyes Crimson as the Gemstone we found. Then it kicked in, The Gemstone was the SABLEYE! They fought and fought, and we called our Pokemon Gengar and Alakazam to aid the Exorcist. She finally sent it back and sealed it within the Gemstone it was Coming from... Tired and weak she then spoke to us, "it seems the SABLEYE was once abused and started to Hate everything around it, and when it died its SOUL clung to its Crimson EYE so anyone who took it or even touched it the SABLEYE would come out and suck out their SOUL" she said. "So the myth about them sucking out your SOUL was true" I exclaimed, CaptainKid said "Look at the Pokedex, It says it as well!" The Case was finally closed and the Crimson Gemstone was sent to Silph Co. to keep it under wraps or so we thought... THE END... [/spoiler] It didn't want to accept my text from Word 'Chiller" anyone know how to get it to work?

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