DeathRebel24 Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 Well, After some breaks I finally decided to give another try to Magnemite/Magneton. Made the eyes smaller after finding out bigger eyes doesn't necessarily means more moe. Pale or not so pale? Personally I feel like pale is more fitting for Magneton. Link to comment
Ignitehawk Posted September 14, 2015 Share Posted September 14, 2015 (edited) @DeathRebel Pale looks fine to me, though I do wonder if she would look good tan... ~ I noticed recently that nobody has made any attempt to create a more detailed Natu sprite. The current sprite looks kind of... small. [spoiler] [/spoiler] "Tiny Bird" indeed. My last attempt to make a sprite was disastrous, but after much wallowing in regret I eventually found the heart to try again. I daresay this one has gone a little bit better, though I know I still suck eggs at this whole business. Pixels are surprisingly fickle beasts. Probably needs a load of edits or a complete rework before it'll even be passable, but I would like feedback. Is it too small? Is it too simple? Is the cape stupid? Should I give up and throw myself out a window? Edit - Also, feel free to tell me if it's 100% unacceptable for reasons such as "doesn't match the style of Xatu," "doesn't match the style of every other moemon," etc. I need an excuse to practice more anyway, and a complete remaking of the sprite would probably be good practice. Edited September 14, 2015 by Ignitehawk Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) Creo que es mejor un kimono para Natu http://imgur.com/chSKYme Edited September 15, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 15, 2015 Author Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) @Hardcore Use tinypic to upload your image, then click the little picture icon left of the <> icon here to post it as an image. @Ignite Good start, but be more ambitious in both design, pose and and size. Maybe you can do some editing on Hardcore's. @Death Both skin tone are fine. I thought I added this in. Why didn't anyone tell me it wasn't? EDIT: As usual, I have no clue what I am doing. Edited September 15, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 @Moetal what think of my Paras sprite ? Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 15, 2015 Author Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) @Hardcore I like it. The pose is very dynamic. I don't particularly like how kung-fu/asian she looks like though because of the qipao/chinese gown. The basket can stay, but the qipao/chinese gown makes her look like a FIGHTING type instead of BUG. EDIT: Also you might want to shrink it if you are using it as Paras. Her current size is more fitting for Parasect instead. Edited September 15, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 Moetal ¿Qué tal una falda? y diseño Parasect Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 @Moetal This Crobat I have here is slightly different from the one you have: I like Magneton's new pose, but now her leg looks too big. @Hardcore I think Paras' pose is a bit too dynamic. Also, the skirt doesn't really make it less kung-fu looking. The belt part would also need to be changed. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) ESTO Hizo moe Clefairy, el Estilo sí he BIEN? Paras so? Edited September 15, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 That's a really good start for Clefairy. I like the design. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) I must have that crobat *-* Im drawing golduck tonight! Finally have a day off. Probably gonna draw the poli family too. Does anyone have the current politoad??? I have the others in my fire red file. Also i was thinking of a swim suit type design for poliwhirl but would you guys prefer something like this? [Spoiler][/spoiler] Edited September 15, 2015 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
Ignitehawk Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) @Kickern That Crobat has a cute lil' fang, definitely moe. @CrookedWings I like the design in the picture, but I also feel like that kind of dress has been done several times already. Swimsuits are always good for representing water types, but I suppose it depends on what you have in mind. @Moetal I agree that new pose for Magneton looks good. Not as sure about the stockings, 'cause you lost some of the red-blue positive-negative thing that was going on when you made them all black. Maybe thigh-high socks with red and blue accents at the tops? Something like this: It's like... zettai ryouiki without a skirt. Edited September 15, 2015 by Ignitehawk Link to comment
Rache Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 One of Magneton's legs is significantly longer than the other~ Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 @CrookedWings I have a couple different versions of the current Politoed. The first is in the mod/ips, the second is an edit I did of a slightly different version: and I'm also fond of the idea of swimsuits for the Poli family, just as long as the designs fit the pokemon. Link to comment
DeathRebel24 Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) @Moetal It looks nice but now I don't feel it much as a Magneton. Probably because now the amount of black makes it look like it was the main color. @Kickern @RacheLucario I agree about the leg, even if it's probably perspective. EDIT: Perhaps...? Edited September 15, 2015 by DeathRebel24 Link to comment
Ignitehawk Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) I kind of like that one. Definitely think the added gray makes it feel more like Magneton. Edited September 15, 2015 by Ignitehawk Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) @ CrookedWings427 Este duende Poliwag Parece? or this? y el Poliwhirl con traje de baño y Terminar Poliwhrath Edited September 15, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2015 Share Posted September 15, 2015 (edited) Togetic, Clefable, Castform and Cleffa They like? Edited September 15, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 (edited) Just combining Ignitehawk's and DeathRebel's Magneton into one: Edited September 16, 2015 by Kickern Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 16, 2015 Author Share Posted September 16, 2015 (edited) @Hardcore The left arm looks a bit weird, and the lower body seem a bit large and her chest looks a bit weird. What is the mushroom? A hat? Enlarge that mushroom a bit if it is a hat. Aside from low quality, this one is cute. I like these two. The Poliwrath looks weird, and the rest I don't like. For the Magneton, my original idea was to have her body fade a bit with the mono black/dark gray outfit so the head looks like a floating orb (like the original Magneton). Whatever works, I guess. Edited September 16, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 one does not hurt to try to draw a Rhyhorn :'v [img]http://i60.tinypic.com/24px6co.jpg[/img] @Moetal this parasect is good? [img]http://i59.tinypic.com/4si5mr.jpg[/img] Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 16, 2015 Author Share Posted September 16, 2015 (edited) @Hardcore I like the previous more. Also edit your post if you need to add something. Edited September 16, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 (edited) Moetal Muy bien, este Parasect es el infierno para mí Starmie hizo esto con una base, sirve para sprites? Edited September 16, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Moetal 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 16, 2015 Author Share Posted September 16, 2015 (edited) @Hardcore Parasect's body is nicer, but your first's hair is better. I like the design for Starmie, but she seems a bit small. EDIT: More horror. 17 palettes for now. Gonna work on that backsprite another time. Edited September 16, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
Kelarr Posted September 16, 2015 Share Posted September 16, 2015 So did McMagister die Link to comment
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