[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[CrookedWings427]

Playing around

Edited October 12, 2015 by CrookedWings427

[Kickern]

@CW

I like the long-haired one the most.

Fixed palette and shiny:

 

Edit:

"Finished":

Edited October 12, 2015 by Kickern

[Chuggiedynasty]

 

Better pose? I feel like the jumping kick is too similar to the Battle Girl sprite for trainers

[Chuggiedynasty]

As a reminder, this is what we've got for:

Slugma

 

Lickitung

 

Uh, I guess I still need to make the backsprites up to par with the front sprites that you guys have edited

Edited October 12, 2015 by Chuggiedynasty

[AbsoluteRex]

Shroomish with a new hat.

[laGashetaHardcore]

this hitmonchan is good (base of gigalith) 

[Moetal]

@Hardcore

That looks really good actually. The hair looks like it could be re-outlined a bit with a darker shade, the ponytail could use some cleaning up, and the outlines for the gloves could be softened a bit, but outside of that I think it's great. I personally think the hair should be more brown/tan like the original, but I'm always open to blondes.

 

Unfortunately, all Hitmonlee/Hitmonchan are male, so I'm not so sure about giving them chest.

 

@Crooked

I personally am actually fond of these two:

Can you do something about her cannon, her arm and her coat?

 

@Chuggie

Much better pose, but I feel "she" is still a bit small. I feel both Licky and Slugma could be pushed further before I step in.

 

@Rex

Good improvement. You should put some distance between the eyes, and be more creative with the hair and hat. Try to give her a bigger head/face. Food for thoughts:

Edited October 13, 2015 by Moetal

[Chuggiedynasty]

@moetal

 

Are we gonna make the Hitmons traps then? or actual males like the Nidorino line.

 

Also, do you mean more detail, or more "moe"?

[Kickern]

"Male" Hitmonchan (needs more work):

[Moetal]

@Kickern

Spiky hair, thicker eyebrows?

Need a more muscular chest imo.

[CrookedWings427]

@hardcore/kickern/moetal
Cuuute!

@moetal/kickern
These were my favorites.

Is that a no on the gold bikini bottom?

Edited October 13, 2015 by CrookedWings427

[kierby29]

@moetal

 

is she " Moe" enough?

[Moetal]

@kierby

She's VERY VERY thin. Do I make myself clear this time? I don't know if it's your screen or whatever is making you see differently, but you need to double the width you have now for the entire sprite. Compare another sprite's head with your. Do you see your head is half the width of all the other sprites' head? Do you see your body is half the width of all other sprite's body?

 

@Crooked

Let's go with this one then. The yellow bikini is good. We just need to squeeze in another color for the proper outline (I've done it in blue previously due to lack of color and as an afterthought). Might just need to hijack a color from the turtle shell.

 

@Chuggie

More details, more clean up, etc.

Edited October 13, 2015 by Moetal

[CrookedWings427]

@moetal
Sounds good! The turtle shell brown color should definitely work. Ill work on her after work :)

Edit:
Just realized poliwag doesnt have a backsprite yet. Ill get that going today too. I have off the next 3 nights. So tons of edits coming this way ;D


Edit 2:
Ok so i know the second one is lacking a little depth in the coat, but by taking out the darkest blue i freed up a color and it isnt too noticable. I think with an extra shade of brown i can make the turtle shell colored coat really stand out as a turtle shell. Opinions?

I made small edits on the hand and arm but im not sure i made it better. Small edits on the coat and left cannon as well. Not sure what to do with the cannon other than fixing a pixel here and there so any suggestions are much appreciated.

Edit 3:
Any good?


Edit 4:
The white trim is more like blastoise so I thought I'd give it a shot. I kinda like it.


Edit 5:
Trying to make the colors a little more "blastoisey." Also the palette was at 17 so i made the midtone for the skin rosier and took out the blush color.

Edited October 13, 2015 by CrookedWings427

[Chuggiedynasty]

More work done on backsprites

 

Licki

 

Slugma

[CrookedWings427]

@chuggied


Tweaked the colors to look more like slugma


@kierby
Try filling this in.

The legs will have to bend since theyre obviously being cut off.
These are about the proportions of a final form.
Keep the canvas at 64x64; youre editing your sprites at some odd dimensions. When you want to show us your sprite resize it to 128x128 but only work on it when its 64x64.
Also make sure you have no more than 16 colors which includes your background color.

Edited October 13, 2015 by CrookedWings427

[laGashetaHardcore]

any suggestion??

 

[Chuggiedynasty]

@hardcore

 

Looks good, maybe you can make her more fierce (if you want)

http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/thumb/4/47/309Electrike.png/250px-309Electrike.png

Electrike is pretty scrappy, right? It depends on if we are changing Manectric as well

 

@Crookedwings

 

Yeah, that looks great O_O I dunno how similar we have to make it to Magcargo

Edited October 14, 2015 by Chuggiedynasty

[laGashetaHardcore]

good?? 

[kierby29]

@crooked

yay thank you know I clearly understand :D

may I ask you about my work when i finish ?

[AbsoluteRex]

New hair and hat

 

http://s28.postimg.org/js7ukkd09/shroomish_NHL.png    http://s1.postimg.org/ch1fasprv/shroomish_NHT.png

 

just new hair

 

http://s3.postimg.org/mwej9t43j/shroomish_A2.png     http://s1.postimg.org/g5r4a9zsr/shroomish_A28.png

 

i'm leaving links because of this error "You are not allowed to use that image extension on this community"

[Kickern]

@Rex

When resizing your images, make sure to use the "nearest neighbor" setting so it doesn't end up looking blurry.

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Edited October 14, 2015 by Kickern

[Moetal]

@Crooked

Slugma looks much better, although her legs still look a bit skinny and wonky (I think her left/our right foot looks small compare to her other foot, both leg looks a bit thin compare to the body). I think her face is a bit on the chubby side, but I guess some people would see that as moe.

 

Your Edit 5 looks kinda bad. Start again at Edit 4. Now that I look at it from a distance, her other cannon is too huge compare to her bazooka-cannon-thingamajig. You can get rid of it or mod it as you see fit. The other arm too, if you want.

 

@Hardcore

I want to use this as Electrike.

If you insist on not listening to me when I ask to work on existing sprites and make new ones, go try your hands on new Manetric instead. 

 

@Rex

Your first one is looking much better. It's still low quality, but at least it is starting to look cute. The eyes are creepy/demonic looking. Why are her eye-whites yellow?

Edited October 14, 2015 by Moetal

[Kickern]

Gave editing Slugma a shot:

[CrookedWings427]

@moetal
Ill see what i can do about the cannon. Ill probably be working on the poliwag backsprite tonight. Does blastoise have a backsprite yet?

@chuggied
To be honest I'm not even sure what magcargo's current sprite looks like. Chances are she'll be getting redone also so just make them relatable when that time comes.
Work on making the slugma backsprite look more like my version of the front sprite and then ill clean that up too.

Edit:
If this is the current magcargo i can make it look more like slugma (or vice versa) no problem.


Edit 2: also feel free to change up what i did :)
Food for thought (i definitely think the slugma eyes should be clips)
[Spoiler][/spoiler]

@kierby
Yeah ill help you as much as i can.

@kickern
That looks much better, i had a hard time with the legs.

Edited October 14, 2015 by CrookedWings427