AlateaOlwyn Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 I've been writing some poems lately and have been bugging many friends with them already. I was debating if I should put this up here and someone pushed me to do so (thanks Sym). So here it is: The possibilities You are the most special by far Even if now normal is what you are Nothing out of the ordinary Holding potential to be extraordinary Stepping into broad daylight As the sun is shining bright When using your calm mind Your inner strength is easy to find Feeling the water is what you crave You can tame the highest wave It is the depths of the sea Where you would love to be To many you are frightening Controlling thunder and lightning It is your exceptional speed In which you most exceed In your heart lives a blazing fire Which not many can admire But you will prove them wrong As you are immensely strong Hiding in the shade of the trees Hearing the rustling of the leafs Protecting nature from any harm That is your greatest charm Thriving in the most icy place You are pure and simple grace The intense and freezing cold Is the power that you hold With ribbons dancing in the air You easily show your flair Your looks tend to be deceiving As even dragons will be fleeing When the moon takes its place Your defenses start to raise It is hard to pass you by When there’s darkness in the sky You are the most special by far Even if now normal is what you are Nothing out of the ordinary Holding potential to be extraordinary - AlateaOlwyn, 01/10/2014 Anjovies, Symmie, Misfire33 and 8 others 11 Link to comment
Richie Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Sounds nice ^~^ AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
Symmie Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Yeah boiiiiii!!!!! AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
PinkWings Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Pyro mentioned you were on a poem writing spree x) Nice work tho o/ AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 Pyro mentioned you were on a poem writing spree x) Haha, yeah. I think I wrote about 14 in 5 days. Didn't even show him all anymore ^^' And thanks ^-^ Link to comment
ThinkNice Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 It's a good start. I'd advice you not to chain yourself to rhyme and let your words free. Sometimes the poem feels forced, try playing with rhytms and using a combination of different rhymes. It'll bring more of a story and structure to your poems. Good luck C: Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 It's a good start. I'd advice you not to chain yourself to rhyme and let your words free. I don't like to write free verse. To me it feels like writing in general, which is something I truely hate and I always struggle to get what's going on in my mind to appear on paper. For some weird reason the rhymes are what enables me to let things out, even though this one was just for fun :) Thanks for your comment though ^-^ I do wonder now if someone will mention what the poem is about ^^ Link to comment
ThinkNice Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Earth Now I'm out of guesses Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 Earth Now I'm out of guesses Wind So close, nice try ;) Link to comment
Mike Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 As not really a person who likes poems to begin with i really enjoyed it. gj. My guess is: yourself as a person AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 4, 2014 Author Share Posted October 4, 2014 As not really a person who likes poems to begin with i really enjoyed it. gj. My guess is: yourself as a person It's not, it's actually pokemon related, that's why I put it up here ^_^ Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 4, 2014 Author Share Posted October 4, 2014 Then it is Mewtwo False ^_^ Link to comment
Kiliminati Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 This is beautiful Ala <3 AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
Chae Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 Since you told me what it was about, it actually seems pretty clear when reading it for the second time. xD AlateaOlwyn 1 Link to comment
dedegendut Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 nice work alatea :P , is this about eevee? hue AlateaOlwyn and RysPicz 2 Link to comment
AlateaOlwyn Posted October 4, 2014 Author Share Posted October 4, 2014 nice work alatea :P , is this about eevee? hue Thank you dede and yes, it is ^-^ Link to comment
ThinkNice Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 Haha smart, I was thinking of a Fairy type cauz dragons. I see now Link to comment
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