Rache Posted September 15, 2014 Share Posted September 15, 2014 I think I might have fixed it. Does it still resemble Togetic enough or is it too vague now? Eggplant, McMagister, razielhd and 2 others 5 Link to comment
TheBurningBlue Posted September 15, 2014 Share Posted September 15, 2014 I think I might have fixed it. Does it still resemble Togetic enough or is it too vague now? It's my opinion, but I like the face much better now. I think it's great, and is about ready for the game. However, Moetal the Moe god will see if it is worthy of being in the game. Also, as a question, will this ever be getting a custom PokéMMO GUI made for it? Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 15, 2014 Share Posted September 15, 2014 @Rache It's moe now, I think it would look even more like Togetic if you added the egg red/blue patterns to the skirt. Her right arm (our left) might be a little short. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 16, 2014 Author Share Posted September 16, 2014 @Lache It's much better, but still a bit off here and there for the face. The body proportion seems a bit wacky, and the dress feels a bit plain. Other than that, it looks pretty good. @Magi No energy nor the time to. Link to comment
Rache Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 (edited) Made some adjustments here and there. Is this better? Also version 1 of Togepi and Golduck. Focused more on making the designs not-awful. Will make backsprites once the front ones are final. Togepi. Pretty much a mini-Togetic. Umbrella etc because of Cloud Nine disabling weather effects (and also because it matches Golduck's webbed feet). Scarf = beak.The rest should be pretty self-explanatory. This one probably needs a lot of editing. Edited September 16, 2014 by RacheLucario McMagister and Reve 2 Link to comment
thief001 Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 [img]http://i59.tinypic.com/u5wu8.png[/img] [img]http://i57.tinypic.com/sf7zvq.png[/img] My crappy plusle & minun. . Mini togetic is cute . . Link to comment
Rache Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 That reminds me... I ended up finishing my versions of the rodents last week. Plusle. Not too sure about the red on the coat. Made two Minuns since I wasn't sure which would be better or if they should be merged. Not too sure about the quality of the headphones. My crappy plusle & minun. . These actually have a lot of potential if neatened up a little~ Link to comment
SachiShimazu Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 @Rache The Golduck looks pretty cool, and mini togetic is a bit cuter. Doesn't need bishie sparkle. Link to comment
Reve Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 @rache Yes child.....let the moe consume you....let it flow through you... Goddam rache i feel they look pretty moe tbh i love the mini togetic/togepi however id consider it more mini togetic than togepi since well...imo it doesnt resemble togepi really (no shell, nor spikes, etc) but thats just my crappy opinion Link to comment
thief001 Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 @magi sir how many moemons are in your list. .i can make a rough art for you but the quality wont be very good but if I can help in anyways. . Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 @thief This is my gen I shortlist: [spoiler] Rattata line (in progress) Pidgey line Spearow Ekans line Pikachu line Nidoran female line NIdoran male line Abra line Drowzee line Krabby line Koffing line Mr. Mime Electabuzz Pinsir Gyarados Ditto Porygon Omanyte line Kabuto line [/spoiler] @Rache Minor edits to Golduck. Your sprite has 17 colours so you need to fix that. Hmm, not quite what I was looking for in terms of the red and blue patterns on Togepi/tic. I was thinking of the confetti-style markings that the actual pokemon have. Togepi in particular needs this and also some headgear (http://chikorita85.deviantart.com/art/Togepi-Princess-149041888) to look like Togepi. But the moe is definitely there. ... I am sad that no one makes cute Raticate gijinkas. The again, making cuteness out of the non-cute is kind of my raison d'etre at this point. I swear maids are the answer to everything. Kamigoroshi 1 Link to comment
Kamigoroshi Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 I just hope that the Paras line will receive a little facelift as well in the near-ish future. [spoiler] Seeing all these adorable Paras/Parasect crossovers with Sakura Chiyo over at pixiv makes one want to own one too. :D [/spoiler] Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 16, 2014 Author Share Posted September 16, 2014 @Magi You have a maid fetish don't you? @Lache Togepi and Togetic's hair can be rougher/spiker IMO. Both of their eyes are a bit too huge also. Mod Golduck's red gem a bit. Give her a tiara or something or move it onto the scarf or something. @thief The design and pose is pretty good for you mouses. I recommend taking elements from Lache's (namely the hair ribbon/headphone) and put it into your. Move the red one more leftward so it is centered in the frame. TheBurningBlue 1 Link to comment
Septentrion Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 These actually have a lot of potential if neatened up a little~ Wouldn't these moemon be considered huge. They are cute, but poses like that filling up the screen implies huge moemon. Link to comment
Rache Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 Fixed (I think) all three. Should I move on to backsprites/Psyduck, or is there more that needs adjusting? Golduck: Minor shading adjustments, moved the gem, and dropped a colour. Togepi: Made the hair messier/spikier, eyes smaller, and added triangles. Togetic: Made the hair messier, eyes smaller, added triangles, and cleaned some lines. Reve 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 17, 2014 Author Share Posted September 17, 2014 @Rache Togepi's body is good. Move the right eye to the right by one pixel (I think), and hammer in the left side of the cheek; it's pointing out too much at the moment as if she has pluffy cheeks/toothache/etc. The overall hair is good except for the positioning of the spikes on the top; they resemble the back spikes of godzilla or like a rooster's comb rather than a crown. I'd say give her pale blonde hair instead of leaving her white (original Togepi is light yellow, while Togetic is actually pale yellow instead of white). Togetic's pattern is messy as oppose to Togepi's. It feels too crowded. Remove some and reposition the others. Try moving the left eye (the blue one) downward by one pixel, and make a variation where you undo the right eye. The legs/feet might be a bit tiny compare to your upper body. Golduck's umbrella is off centered. Her right leg (our left) seems a bit wacky also because you tried to squeeze it into the frame.. Link to comment
missiri Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 @magi I saw the gen1 short list and have a single request for it and that is meowth and persian which look like dr frankenstein killed a person and put their head on a cat Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 @Moetal Sir, guilty as charged, sir! @missiri I've noted your request. I won't add it to the short list though, since it's supposed to be a short list and neccessarily incomplete. TheBurningBlue and Kamigoroshi 2 Link to comment
Kamigoroshi Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 @McMagister Aw, no more visible central incisors for Raticate maido? The teeths in your previous pic were one of her charm points. :o Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 @Kamigoroshi I added it. Kamigoroshi 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 17, 2014 Author Share Posted September 17, 2014 @Magi Can you make two variations using the draft's eyes? Link to comment
thief001 Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 I found some nice pic in the net and try to draw them but . . . It still sucks @moetal sir ill try to redraw those two. . @magi sir can I try koffing? Link to comment
Rache Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 Tried to fix up Spearow's design and touched it up to make it hopefully usable. It's probably still lacking something, but I'm not quite sure what that is. No matter what I did, I couldn't make a better mouth. Togetic fixes. All have enlarged legs/feet and a better pattern. The only differences are the eyes. 1 = Blue eye moved down + red untouched. 2 = Both eyes untouched. I prefer this version. 3 = Blue eye moved down + red enlarged. 4 = Blue eye untouched + red enlarged. Togepi fixes. Changed the tint from slightly blue to noticeably yellow. Made the hair less reptilian-spike-like. Fixed the cheek. 1 = eyes left alone. 2 = right eye moved over. Fixed Golduck's umbrella. Couldn't really do anything about the leg, but it looks okay to me. I then got a little Psydtracked sidetracked and made version 1 of Psyduck. [spoiler]The more accurate-to-the-Pokemon version. [/spoiler] Sakura, Asakano and Kamigoroshi 3 Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 @Moetal @Rache Togetic 2 and Togepi 1 looks the best I think. @Thief Sure you can try Koffing, TheBurningBlue 1 Link to comment
SachiShimazu Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 I think the last Raticate is cutest. Also, I was just browsing through NSE and there are like 20 sprites of a moemon Klinklang for some reason. And is it still possible for the cruddy Sneasel I uploaded to be used as a template for someone else to create a decent looking moemon, or will it just need to be redone by someone else? Anything is better than the current Sneasel in my opinion. I could maybe just make bases for other people who know what they are doing to make better moemon out of if that is okay with you guys. Link to comment
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