burningscarlet Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 @Septentrion Latias looks somewhat decent. Latios... Needs some work. Haha. If we change him into a girl do you think it'll be motivating enough to get it done decently? Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 (edited) @Kickern Readded the dark blue How does everyone feel about this shiftry? @laGashetaHardcore Has clefairys back sprite been updated to match the front? Edited September 10, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 @CrookedWings427 I try :'D Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 @CrookedWings427 Can anything be done about the yellow eyes? I feel that it kind of blends in with the skin tone. Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 (edited) @Majena Better. Magnemite looks good. Want to try your hand at the back sprite? @CrookedWings427 Heracross looks much better now. Back sprite? Edit: Trying something. Not sure if better or worse. @burningscarlet Latios is male only. Let's keep it that way. @laGashetaHardcore Poliwag's arms don't look right, otherwise nice edits to the family. Edited September 10, 2016 by Kickern Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 (edited) I think its starting to look moe ^-^" @laGashetaHardcore It looks good, maybe try softening the outline on the hands in the backsprite? Also, it might just be me, but i think the hair might be a pixel too long. @McMagister Do you mean shiftry? Yeah its been bothering me, shiftrys eyes are yellow but i want to use the green, it would also free up a color. Ill make a green eyed version just to see. Heracross' eyes are bothering me too but idk what to do about those. Edit Green eyed shiftry! @Kickern Looks good! Ill work on the back sprite after today's kingdra edits :) Edited September 10, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
Swirly Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 Latias: I think the arms should not be in the crying position. It looks odd. The backsprite is still rough and needs to be refined. Latios: There are a lot of edits needed. I'm not sure where to start Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 @CrookedWings427 @Kickern fixing the body and the face she need a dark face (Grass/Dark type) Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 10, 2016 Share Posted September 10, 2016 (edited) @Kickern @laGashetaHardcore I feel like we can get away with a mischievous look, ill play with it more when i wake up. Edited September 10, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 more dark!! ? @Moetal how many sprites are ready for patch and which need to be polished? Edited September 11, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 Enlarged and stuff. @laGashetaHardcore Stuff added: Seel, Dewgong, Golduck (I still think the face could be better), Iggy, Azurmarill, Jolteon edit, loli Tangela Stuff I need in 256x64 (because I am lazy): Charmander edit, Butterfree edit, Nidoqueen edit, Beedrill (butt only, no feet), Gardevoir family, Smeargle below, "smaller head" Beautifly, Jiggly and Wiggly, Fearow, Hariyama, Kabuto/Kabutops, Slugma Spoiler Stuff need review: Illumise/Volbeat (I get your concept Kickern, but the color in the edits look pretty bad imo, and I am siding towards Crook's new one), Poliwag family (MUCH MUCH better, but I think I need to make some edits myself) Edited September 11, 2016 by Moetal CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 Stuff I need in 256x64 part II: Qwilfish, Marowak Spoiler Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @Moetal Any edits i could make to the horsea line? (Kingdras back sprite has some empty pixels from when i moved the fan, ill fix it) Edited September 11, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 @CrookedWings427 It needs more polishing, but l can't pinpoint what to fix. Put them on pause for now and get some fresh air. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Sounds good @laGashetaHardcore There's an extra color if you want to readd the third green. But i suggest leaving the one yellow since it matches the pokemon More mischievous maybe? Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 I think the problem with poliwhirl is that her pose rather stiff, and her relatively simple design doesn't help bring her charm out. Wrath's right (our left) twintail has the wrong shading - light should coming from the right rather than the left. Also reduced the shading on the gloves. Two face variations, not sure which is better. EDIT: Also, this is the reason for my lack of activities the past few days: Spoiler Edited September 11, 2016 by Moetal CrookedWings427, razielhd and McMagister 3 Link to comment
Majena Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 Feel free to ignore anything I say. The horsea line (especially seadra) might benefit by making the shading a little more pronounced. Right now the shades blue you're using are pretty similar so it looks a little flat. Also where the lighting is coming from is kind of ambiguous. (See the lighting on Magi's Gardevoir) Edit: might as well copy past it in if I'm referencing it. Edit2: other comments - The dark part of seadra's hair in the front sprite looks weird to me. Probably mostly because I can't figure out how the hair is supposed to be hanging. - The edges of kingdra's fan (not the pointy edges, the long straight edge) needs some shading. It looks very 2D. - For some reason kingdra's face doesn't look very moe. Maybe you could try to go for the four lines face that Magi posted about before? Edited September 11, 2016 by Majena Link to comment
toottoot Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Sorry I haven't been doing anything lately. I have to run Windows on my Mac to use paint.net, but all of my schoolwork is on my Mac partition, and work comes first :'( @CrookedWings427 I personally disagree with Majena on most points. -While some sprites benefit from sharper contrast in colors, I really like the light shading on your Horsea line. -Some anti-aliasing would be nice on the straight dark blue part, but the fan is supposed to be pretty flat, so it would make sense for it to look 2D. -I think Kingdra's face shape is pretty moe as it is. There's something about her right (our left) eyebrow that's bothering me, though (it looks a bit...sharp? ouo) The gripes I have are just that Kingdra's backsprite's mouth/nose seem a little low, and Seadra's backsprite's head looks a bit too narrow. Also, something about the spike in the middle of Seadra's bangs looks a bit off to me, but I can't quite figure out what. That being said, you deserve a break after all that hard work! Thanks for being so on top of things :) CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
Rache Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 I had some time on my hands, so drafted a new Totodile as the current one is tiny. Backsprite is subpar, but can probably be edited into something usable. razielhd, Kamigoroshi, Munya and 1 other 4 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 You had free time, but you didn't spend it on the birds? Dammit Lache you're making me mad. Link to comment
Kurodashi Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 I convinced Rache that Totodile > Birds =) Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 (edited) @Moetal Half of these I had already posted before back on page 178. Alternate shiny palette: Unless I somehow overlooked them, I don't think Magi made back sprites for Kirlia or Gardevoir yet. I don't seem to have a back sprite for that Beautifly, either. Edited September 11, 2016 by Kickern DoomsdayFTW, razielhd, PufferJumps and 1 other 4 Link to comment
Kamigoroshi Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 No love for an Alolan Cubone shiny pallette? ;_; Spoiler Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 @Kamigoroshi Just for you: Kamigoroshi 1 Link to comment
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