Moetal Posted September 25, 2015 Author Share Posted September 25, 2015 @Rex It's good for a starter. I personally do not like your design, and I feel there's no need to blow his(?) skirt up to show his pantsu. Secondly, as you might've noticed, I see it as a guy wearing a dress... which is okay if that was what you were going for. Might want to shorten the neck (pull head down or body upward). His left hand is more like a claw than a hand. Link to comment
AbsoluteRex Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 @Moetal Well the problem is i first made this But is 128x128. Link to comment
fyreman666 Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 I'm new to this site, and this is the one project I'm paying most attention to, because I love Moemon! I don't know how to make sprites, sadly, but hey, I can give feedback! Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 TheBurningBlue 1 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 (edited) @CrookedWings There's something I've been wondering about her hair; is it "flat" and wavy, or does it curl around? I think curls give her hair a bit more "depth": :) Edit: Attempting to add more detail to the hair buns; I forgot I'm bad at drawing: Edited September 25, 2015 by Kickern Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 @kickern Cute! ^-^ They did look a bit flat. I tend to be very basic sometimes x.x" Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 I don't know what I'm doing: I think the hair bun on the back sprite needs to be rounder. It's kinda egg-shaped. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 X3 ok! Ill reshape it. And i think its looking good! Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 (edited) and if we change the sprites ?? my paras becomes Parasect and Parasect of deathrebel becomes paras?? wigglytuff Edited September 25, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 @hardcore Your paras would have to look much older to be parasect. The two also have to look "related" too. Also i would work on clefable before wigglytuff Link to comment
axx Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 paras maybe? lost interest half way tho D: Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 (edited) @kickern I fixed the buns shape, though i might have to make them smaller still. I havent implemented your changes yet ;^; but i will! (I know i could have just edited the buns on yours >.>) Sorry that took so long too, im so sick right now and have to buy a new phone charger x.x @axx The concept for paras is sooo cute, pleeeease keep at it x3 Edited September 27, 2015 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
DeathRebel24 Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) It would be needed to change the whole concept to make Parasect a Paras, but that one can work as a shiny I guess. Besides I think my Parasect is too big for being a Paras. I'm leaning more to skirt, looks more fitting IMO. Edited September 28, 2015 by DeathRebel24 Moetal 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 28, 2015 Author Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) @Death As usual, I don't always "like" stuff, but you know I really mean it when I do. I prefer the second for Para, but the lower part of the dress and legs seems a bit off to me. The arm looks too long now that I stare at it too long. The hat is nice for Parasect, but the face could use some touch up and I prefer Hardcore's bodies more although your execution is much better. @Kickern/Crooked The hairbun with the lines look nicer, but need to change to the shape like the final edit Crooked did. The original mouth for the front sprite looks better. If you want to turn it into the smile, flip it horizontal or something. EDIT: EDIT 2: Backsprite is missing ahoge. Quick! Someone glue it back on before she dies. EDIT 3: Now that I look at it, I realize the front and back expression and eye shapes don't match very well. Might need to rework the back more. EDIT 4: Self compiling, ignore. [spoiler][/spoiler] Edited September 28, 2015 by Moetal axx and CrookedWings427 2 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) @moetal [Spoiler]yesss♥[/spoiler] XDD nooo not death by missing ahoge! Edited September 28, 2015 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
DeathRebel24 Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) @Moetal I didn't notice how long the arm looks until it was pointed it out, wow. I hope I got it all right. Edited September 28, 2015 by DeathRebel24 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 (edited) Finished? 512 x 128: 256 x 64: Edit: @Hardcore I'm not sure why your images have resizing errors. Work with it at the 64 x 64 size. What I mean by resizing errors is each and every pixel at the 64 x 64 size should become a 2 x 2 pixel block when resized to 128 x 128. There were some rows/columns of 1 x 2 or 2 x 1 blocks in the images you posted. Edited September 29, 2015 by Kickern Link to comment
Rache Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 I got slightly distracted and sprited the wrong bird~ Spearow backsprite in progress, Taillow front sprite maybe finished. TheBurningBlue, CrookedWings427 and axx 3 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 (edited) @Rache It looks good, but you've got 1 too many colors on that Taillow. I think the mid red on the scarf and the mid red on the eyes should be the same. Looking forward to that Spearow back sprite.~ Edited September 29, 2015 by Kickern Link to comment
Rache Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 Fixed~ Must have changed the shade of red when working on the scarf, but then forgot to change the eye colour at the same time. CrookedWings427 and TheBurningBlue 2 Link to comment
Munya Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 Does pokemmos custom modpacks have a color restriction to them? I know the rom still gets patched, just curious about the other half. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 30, 2015 Share Posted September 30, 2015 @rache That taillow is adorable! @kickern I cant think of anything else to add. On to poliwhirl! You think i can get away with poliwhirl only having a side ponytail? Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 30, 2015 Author Share Posted September 30, 2015 (edited) @Lache Can we convert your sprite into Swellow instead while we minor mod the current Swellow into Taillow? Also I'm not a fan of the two colored hair. Edited September 30, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
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